Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Personal Statement

Put personality behind the facts
Bring facts listed on your application to life
Solve mysteries on your application 
Somethig really interesting on your application, write about it and not something boring
Uc's looking for
Leadership not always elected, shows them you get something done, make something happen, continue making changes
Explain what kind of leader, how you led, start to dig first, show what you made happen, leadership style. Take initiative, make things happen that wouldn't have if you weren't around. You stepped up and took command. Actions are guided by being role model, show them how to t

Overcoming obstacles if nothing is able to stop you, then you can never be stopped. No depression, if hard, you'll work twice as hard. Context for your achievements. Ran fast time, with crutches. How could she do without crutches. Had obstacles and still had good gpa. What could she have done if she didn't have obstacles. Didn't see obstacles because everyone you know has that. Ask people that know you for ideas
Feel like whining. Didn't whine to get over it. Tell about obstacle for what you did about it. You want to know. Tell them what you did. Rescued self, this is what I faced, why made stronger, nothing can stop you

Diversity see world differently. Understanding of ideas is escalated. Anything culture experiences that goes you a different perspective. Different mindset, other people don't see, questions. Interesting things to contribute. Something changing who you were. Learn you need to change. Different ways he thought and acted. Differet perspective. Act differently than peers and the way thinks. Different way of thinking. Might have something to tech other students. 


Passion/ commitment. Obstacles for students have none. What did you do. Passionate about something. Obstacle you chose for yourself. Learned form it and hard work. Commitment to somethig, don't give up, important care about it


Goals why you want for future. Don't know. Makes world better. Motivate me to make world better. Challenges you makes you better like feeling that pushes you past your limits. Change world. 


Additional comments
Extra essay, activities

They want to know facts, answering the prompts
 Looking for how you have chosen to have life be about 
Show how far you have taken science or sports
Theme of life, obstacles in life and overcoming them. 

Chose two different topics
Choose story that shows three different things, now they get a better picture of who you are


Common application 
 Turn for horrible to awesome. 
Topic 
Make it about self. What she did about obession. Made website, tried to find their CDs. She'd be up until 2 on school night working on website. Towel by door. Monderating website, with 1000 people. Actually contacted her

Learned about her and what it meant. 
Tell what you want them to take it away
And that's what you need to know. What you need to do is make things crazy do what others think it is impossible to do

What it means for future. Up in formt asking questions, cure cancer. Do it over the top, crazy, make things happen. 
Tell meaning and what means for life 



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